Dawn Surprise... Walking along a rural path... One beautiful Fall day at sunrise,
I came across a country girl... And I got a special surprise,
She was taking off her boots... Gonna take a dip in the dawn,
The sunlight gleamed off her hair... And she had nothing on.
Not a stitch... She was beautiful to see... As the light glistened on her skin,
I watched her step to the shore... And then she stepped on in.
Graceful and lovely... Treading water in the blue,
Like a mermaid or a siren... She mesmerized me too,
And then she stepped out... Like Aphrodite rising from waves,
And my breath was taken away... Waters parting like her slave,
She dried herself where she stood... Her beauty became a haze,
Then she was gone in a blink... Leaving me there amazed.
Not a sound... I then continued walking... And I couldn't believe my eyes,
There she came like a vision... Walking over the rise,
Her hair was dry and she was too... It's like it'd been dream
That sweet country girl I met... Just wasn't what she'd seemed.
I then awoke from my slumber... And all at once I knew,
That country girl appearing to me... It was really and truly you.
My beautiful muse... It was nice dream too.
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  • mjolnir_strikeDawn Surprise... Walking along a rural path... One beautiful Fall day at sunrise,
    I came across a country girl... And I got a special surprise,
    She was taking off her boots... Gonna take a dip in the dawn,
    The sunlight gleamed off her hair... And she had nothing on.
    Not a stitch... She was beautiful to see... As the light glistened on her skin,
    I watched her step to the shore... And then she stepped on in.
    Graceful and lovely... Treading water in the blue,
    Like a mermaid or a siren... She mesmerized me too,
    And then she stepped out... Like Aphrodite rising from waves,
    And my breath was taken away... Waters parting like her slave,
    She dried herself where she stood... Her beauty became a haze,
    Then she was gone in a blink... Leaving me there amazed.
    Not a sound... I then continued walking... And I couldn't believe my eyes,
    There she came like a vision... Walking over the rise,
    Her hair was dry and she was too... It's like it'd been dream
    That sweet country girl I met... Just wasn't what she'd seemed.
    I then awoke from my slumber... And all at once I knew,
    That country girl appearing to me... It was really and truly you.
    My beautiful muse... It was nice dream too.

  • mjolnir_strike🌹Barbara thank you my sweet friend 😇... A boot lamp, eh? LOL 😊... You're so kind to me honey 😇 @sassycowgirl
  • mjolnir_strike🌹 Thank you so much Nitzan honey 😇@nitzan_pivnik ✨🙏✨
  • mjolnir_strike🙏 Thank you kindly... Yes I write all of the poems myself 😊 ... Thank for asking!! @rui_one_76
  • atompeteHaha to let them check you out
  • mjolnir_strike😉 Cool... Thank you my friend... That was very kind of you... I went and looked at the hashtag you left... There were some nice shots in it 😉@atompete 🙏
  • one_beautifulmomentsThat is amazing you are very good @vanirs_hammer
  • mjolnir_strike😉 Thank you for saying that... That is a wonderful compliment ✨🙏✨@rui_one_76
  • sassycowgirlWell Scott letting go and tears fall is healthy. Hurts sometimes. In the end ill be OK. Not sure if your up on your country tunes~ Im just like Lil Miss by Sugarland. Enjoy your Sunday my friend @vanirs_hammer
  • mjolnir_strike😉 Yes indeed letting go is healthy Barbara... I just hope you're doing better than you were. Thank you for your kind wishes, I hope you are having a lovely day honey 🙏 @sassycowgirl 🌹
  • sassycowgirlThank you Scott @vanirs_hammer for caring. Im normally a really strong person! The weather, lack of sleep, worry , list is endless... its breaking me. I will be fine. I just see what was a happy youthful face for my age, very sad, tired, lines forming. Today was a beautiful day. Wish I brought my NikonD300 down to the barn. It's getting dusty.
  • instablond1@vanirs_hammer ❤💫beautiful Scott!
  • mjolnir_strikeThank you so much Bar ✨❤️✨ @instablond1 😇
  • jesscsproatBeautiful gallery!
  • mjolnir_strike@jesscreid ✨🙏✨Thank you so much for your kind attention and for following me... I love your gallery as well Jessica 🌹... I hope you liked my poetry too ✨☺️✨
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